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 commas: 14 before "и", 29 before "что", 36 after "думает", 40 after "помню".

More important (some are too critical, but just to say)

6 now we say *"знает русский язык", but before it was Ok to say "знает по-русский"

9 we say tommorow we *WILL learn as well as we ARE learning

19 all possible. "старшему брату" is the most logical

26 or "идешь" either *"ходишь" we could use in daily. but one is closer to attending some activities

27 logically *"ходил", superlogically "шел". and "идти" to make your russian friends rofl out)

29 toooo critical. "носит" of course. but saying "всегда несет" you add some drammatic or ceremonial, even biblical notes

35 ohh. probably "but". of course gramatically all

37 maybe zombiepocalypse and radiation and Ann is not in our refuge and "поэтому" or "потому" she's ill)

39 logically "что"

40 *"c кем". of course "у кого" sounds even not half as bad as

41 the same. we could say *"дам" and "даю"

43 "приедет ли" logically

45 "сказали" is the right one. but i'd pick out "рассказали", like a fable. as if you have never seen real snow and smn told you

49 *weak eyesight - glasses. but "wears glasses, cuz looks of colour" - all the hypsters do it :D

52 we daily could say "будет известная артистка" or even ceremonial.

66 "тогда" logically

69 all possible. *"кто-то"(stranger) and "кто-нибудь"(one of us if I command). and just to my liking something - the beast